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straight razor

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the cold metal in your hand, you barely hear her scream.
Her back's against the wall, but there's an ache in you.
A fire that burns through your mind.
At the moment, it's all you can do to keep from killing her.

Flowers crumple in your fist as you rip the fabric of her shirt.
She cringes and covers herself, as if you needed to see.
You saw it all already. In her pleading eyes. On her wanting lips.
She wants you to hurt her. even though her words lie.

The cold metal caresses warm flesh as she shutters.
Her hot sticky blood runs from such a small wound.
The ache is in your loins, in your eyes, in your teeth.
You need to, have to, release.

Blonde curls are crushed by stubby fingers and you throw her to the motel bed.
She's crying, asking for more. She's been bad.
You flick up the sharp steel dyed red.
Licking of her blood you indulge her.

Water drips from a cold metal faucet. You look up.
Stubble and exhaustion meet you in the mirror.
You tighten the handles, but the dripping continues.
The sound of it fills the room.

The cold metal in your hand, pink cream on your face.
It was supposed to be white, but there was an ache in you.
Metal scrapes against flesh.
At the moment, it's all you can do to keep from killing yourself.

Rain turns to a waterfall in your mind and you turn on the sound.
You grab the cold knobs and turn them till the sound dies.
It doesn't work. She is wet. She is dripping.
Her blood runs down the shower drain.

Flowers crumple in your fist as you tear the shower curtain down.
You drop it and cover her, not wanting to see.
You saw it already. In her dry dead eyes. On her bloody cracked lips.
She wants to live. even though her still heart lies.
nice how I always write these things after all nighters. This may be the most disturbing of all of them so far. And I wanted to add a lot more detail, but I decided against it.
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mychem-totheend's avatar
Nice ^_^ I really like it. Twisted, but beautifully writtten.